Monday 30 March 2015

The Lavishing Lily

The Lavishing Lily


Once upon a time under the canopy of Amazon,

A beautiful girl in the Brazilian tribe was born.

She was told by her father of an ancient myth,

That in the moon, a noble warrior lived.

She believed the tale and begun to swoon,

Casually fell in love with the Warrior-in-the-moon.

No boy of her tribe seemed worthy of her love,

As she waited for the man who resided in heaven above.

Year following year, her desires grew stronger,

Her family’s dreams to marry her met failure.

The no moon nights begun to be her worst nightmare,

She would patiently wait weeping in deep despair.

She would sky gaze; searching the man of her destiny,

Whenever the mystical moon dawned with rich solemnity.

Often she ran through the darkest Amazon woods,

Trying to catch the pearly rays wherever she could.

Once it did happen on a clear cloudless night,

The moon shone to its fullest like a bewitching bride.

Amid blooming joy she forged ahead meticulously,

And fate carried her lastly to a vast vivacious valley.

Shockingly she found the moon has descended to earth,

Into the plain perspicuous lake, may be to take a bath.

She jumped into the valley to embrace it forever,

Utterly determined to meet her majestic moon warrior.

But the wheels of her fortune let her drown to die,

To the outside world she bid a silent goodbye.

Filled with immense guilt the warrior took pity on her,

Her corpse was transformed into a giant gorgeous flower.

Thereafter it was named the Royal Water Lily,

Also known as the lavish Lily of the valley.

It blossoms, petal by petal, opening wide,

Only on pristine clear full moon nights.







 P.S- I read this tale somewhere over the internet. I just tried to express the ancient myth in form of poetry.


15 comments:

  1. wonderful narrative !! the tale of love is superbly expressed...choice of words used is very apt rendering the poem its beauty..

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  2. Thank you for your precious remarks sir. :)

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  3. Thank you ! :') Gratified!

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  4. You said of a beautiful sad tale through rhyming. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
    Looking forward to read more from you, Swati.
    Keep writing and Happy Blogging :)

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  5. Immense Thanks for this beautiful remarks Simmi! And Thanks Again for the wishes. I wish you the same. :)

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  6. It's beautiful. Loved it. Keep writing. Keep sharing. ;) Cheers! (Y)

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  7. You have done great justice to the lily and her paramour! I grew this flower on my terrace garden and can vouch for its veracity

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  8. THANKS Akshat! I'll keep writing and sharing. :')

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  9. Immense thanks Mahip Sir! Much obliged with your appreciation. Great to know that you grew THE LAVISH LILY on your terrace. Kudos! :)

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  10. I haven't heard of this tale before. But I'm sure ut won't be better than its rhyme version :)

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  11. So you got to know the tale via my poem! great to know that Arish! It was worth sharing with you then. :)
    And yeah, I second that this rhyme version is much better than the original one. :) THanks a ton! :')

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  12. Great job Swati....Always so difficult to convert prose to poetry-and you have done it with elan!

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  13. Thank you so much Sir! Much Obliged. :))

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  14. A bit long, but worth reading every single word of your beautiful poem! :) Keep writing, Swati, you'll make all of us proud very soon. :)

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